You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Madam or Sir, My name is Cole, I have read the advertisement you put in Daily Paper magazine and I exactly want to apply for
this
job
.
First
and foremost, I like the
job
. I am studying a child care course in Tafe Sydney now, I really like to play with kids and look after them. I recommend myself to you as you know I will do my best to take care of your six-year-old daughter.
Secondly
, I am suitable for the
job
. I reckon that I can do the
job
not only because I have a patient character but
also
because have the professional knowledge to conduct the commission,
thus
I can make your darling happy and healthy.
Thirdly
, I will show you how I spend my spare time in Australia. I would like to let you know what I will do most during the period of living in Australia. Most of the time I spend is for studying or learning from my tutors,
besides
that, travelling around the Australian metropolitan city will consume most of my free time. Thanks for your reading, I look forward to your letter. Best regards, Cole Chen May 2022
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