Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

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, when a person is ready to be independent,
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person
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is ready to be independent is to remain in their hometown or home country, or
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to set up in a new place, maybe a new city inside their county or abroad . That depends on what the
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is seeking in their personal improvement or life opportunities, and in my personal case I rather the latter. In Latin America,
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job
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opportunities are minimal and hard to find. especially for artists (like me).
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is likely the main reason for Colombian artists to look for better chances to find a good
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in the arts.
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, an actor that starts his/her career in Colombia will struggle with TV media because it is an exclusive and close environment, and if the same
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wants to be independent and try by himself it is because they have some savings to do it.
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, the US industry produces movies,
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and
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as a daily routine and the possibilities to accomplish an art
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are higher. Another important factor is that if the home country's economy is struggling, a half time
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will not be enough to have a decent daily
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lucrative
creativity
and it may be hard to persist in any dream. In other countries (the
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world) work opportunities are several, gratefully to their strong currency that started being produced and accumulated in massive numbers decades ago. Wealthy nations
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provide and improve many educational resources, basically to support their civil intelligence and get better results in common
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tasks so they can
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their expectations. To conclude, moving anywhere has never been an easy decision;
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a brave and adventurous
person
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that works hard to find what they really want, will be disposed to face the setbacks as many times they have to, and for me, I am ready to decide the best options for my future and to move somewhere to find and do my dream
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, and be well paid for
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what I like.
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