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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

#area #‘curfew’ #teenagers #doors #time #night #adult
Recently, a heated debate
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 when a few reputable health organizations suggested the application of a similar act of heroin selling and usage prohibition _. In
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assay
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, I will analyze why the adoption of
such
 a law could be a breakthrough in our youngsters’ safety, according to my vision.
Firstly
, tobacco does not differ much from heroin when it comes to the addictive effect.
Nicotin
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Nicotine
 , the active ingredient in tobacco, exerts its effect by acting directly on
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 brain cells. Numerous experiments carried out by
scientist
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 on animals,
specailly
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specially
especially
 rats, proved that
this
 toxic chemical does lead by time to dependency, just
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 to the effect experienced with
herion
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heroin
.
Secondly
, the restriction on
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cigarettes
cigarette
selling
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 would surely show an instant decline in tobacco smoking. ” Having easy access to cigarettes puts a tremendous pressure, especially on teenagers,to resist
such
 a temptation”
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Hisham , head of
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Psychology
Pschycology
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 department at Alexandria Medical college , states firmly. “Giving the new generation the sense that the severity of smoking is
equivilant
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equivalent
 to other lethal drugs usage
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would
 be a
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 step, they will thank us for as they get older.” he continues. To recapitulate, applying
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a futuristic law
such
 as the suggested one will
definetly
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definitely
 have a positive impact ,not only on young people’s health but on our society as a whole.
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