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road accidents fatality rate is increasing disscuss this and mention the cause of them and how to defeat them.

Nowadays, Road accidents are one of the greatest problems that we have. It can be caused either by vehicles hitting each other or hitting a person crossing a street, as a consequence; large-scale disabilities and damages can happen. It all started maybe 70 years ago when public transportation had been invented to facilitate moving from one place to another, and
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; the prevalence of deaths because of road accidents is increasing over time. Authorities managers came up with different interpretations about the main reason for raising
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the credit it to the irresponsible drivers who drink alcohol before taking their cars,
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; they may drive fast on a high way.
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 explains why people under thirty are the most exposed to those kinds of tragedies, due to the fact of they are still immature and unreasonable. Others suppose the infrastructure of highways and fast pumps is the main cause, as a
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result government counted in
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 too. I believe that both of these two things are the cornerstone of car accident disasters,
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; I blame the governments because they can be more restricted towards passing rules to punish insanely and rush drivers, I should say testing their blood for drugs and breath for alcohol are the best way to have enough evidence to imprison them. Good designing of highways and the fast pumps will have a huge influence on reducing the rate of accidents, so why doesn’t the government spend money on
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 of spending it to mitigate the losses. Impartially, we are all responsible for
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, so sticking with rules and being responsible is the only way to save the losing lives from Vehicles incidents

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