Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.

Speaking of choosing between a traditional

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and a modern

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building to live in, my preference is the latter. I used to live in a conventional

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house

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and found it causing inconvenience because it lacked many modern

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. A contemporary condominium or an

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block is, in my opinion, a much better choice of accommodation.

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with, the structure of modern

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buildings is more solid than traditional houses. When it comes to a

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to live in,

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is always the top priority to consider.

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the rapid development of technology, the building materials and techniques are

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improving. Most of them are designed to withstand

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natural disasters,

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as earthquakes, typhoons, and the like that strike occasionally.

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, the government will inspect the building based on housing

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regulations to ensure it is a safe building for occupants to live in. A traditional

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, which is usually an older one, is no match for modern buildings. A

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point we must consider is that a modern

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will provide better

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. The construction company will cooperate with a

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company to provide

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safety

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. Most of the apartments are equipped with surveillance cameras,

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alarms, or even

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guards.

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, some of the apartments help residents to connect the

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system with cellphones in order to make sure the

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of the elderly or children at home.

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but not least, another benefit of living in a modern

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is the

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. There will be gyms, elevators, gardens, conference rooms, and even places to dry laundry. Cutting-edge gym

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, could save money and time for residents. To stay in shape, people need places to exercise.

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, a gym in the

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is more accessible to the residents who are interested in keeping fit and working out regularly.

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, the elderly can easily go upstairs with the elevators. All the other

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, usually not in a traditional

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, provides functions to create a convenient environment with comfort for the community. Living in a traditional

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or in a modern building does not matter but the functions and convenience it provides do. With

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equipping an up-to-date

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building to cater for what people need, a safer and more comfortable environment is definitely a better choice

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anyone who pursues comfort in their living territory, and I am no exception in

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of it too.