Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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usually enhance other

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by contributing resources to the poor

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which can not actually come over the poverty issue.

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, the richer states should support in other ways. Personally, it is definitely agreed with changing in the method of giving. Explanation of the drawbacks of providing resources only, and some examples in real case will clarify at

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point of view.

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of the original method, The people who are reciever will be familiar

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receiving every supports from the richer

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.

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, they tend to

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more than

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to solve problems by themselves. By analogy, when dog has owner full with kindness, it only wait feeding from its boss

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of hunting by itself.

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,

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advocating method is not much effective in long-term development.

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, another drawback is

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in particular

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undeveloped

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. It is concerned that what is the main reason

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being poor. Statistically, the states which could not pass the bar of success typically have a high rate of corruption by their unloyal leader.

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, It is similar to throwing all

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precious

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resources

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the waste rather than supporting directly

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people.

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,

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distinct example is the development of world people

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contribution. Since

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organization has been established for a long time, the lacking problem spreading around poor counties is likely an undying problem even though there is a lot of contribution developed.

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, it is clear that

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action could not be an effective way. In conclusion,

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from developed

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only is not a good way of supporting suffered

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. There are many obvious shortcomings and realistic case stated that

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is a solution. In

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, helping could be done in

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such

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various methods;

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, in education.