You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir, I am a regular customer with your company, Since
last
week I bought a hard drive with online order. The order number is :0000000, please check the mode is 10000GB
is
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as

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I ordered. But today when I received the products it is 5000GB, please check the attached picture of the evidence. I am working in the human resource department. Under the pandemic, many companies'
works
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work

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I have to do
with
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apply

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online, which includes training presentation videos, so that's is why I bought the hard drive to extend my laptop. Due to your company
staff
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,staff

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a mistake got the wrong mode, it cause I can not
to
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apply

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do
this
week demonstration training course. As the result, I can not able to finish my job.
Therefore
, one immediate practical solution is could I go to your shop to exchange the product in today afternoon, if
forwaiting
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for waiting

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the delivery to swap that waste waiting time. Yours sincerely Ella
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