Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The developed

countries

usually enhance other

countries

by contributing resources to the poor

countries

which could not actually come over the poverty issue.

Hence

, the richer states should support in other ways. Personally, it is definitely agreed with changing

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the idea of giving.

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of the drawbacks of providing resources only, and some examples in

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will clarify

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point of view.

Firstly

, begin with the shortcomings of the original method, The people who are reciever will be familiar

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receiving every supports from the richer

countries

.

Moreover

, they tend to

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more than learn to solve problems by themselves. By analogy, when

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with kindness, they only wait

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its boss

instead

of hunting by itself.

Hence

,

this

advocating method is not much effective in long-term development.

Secondly

, another drawback is leaders

in particular

undeveloped

countries

. It is concerned that what is the main reason for being poor. Statistically, the states which could not pass the bar of success typically have a high rate of corruption by their leader.

Thus

, It is like throwing all

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precious the resources into the waste rather than supporting directly suffering people.

Lastly

, a distinct example is the development of

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people union’s contribution. Since

this

organization has been established for a long time, the lacking problem spreading around poor counties is likely an undying problem even though there is a lot of contribution developed.

Therefore

, it is clear that

this

action could not be an effective way. In conclusion, the contribution from developed

countries

only is not a good way of supporting suffered

countries

. There are many obvious shortcomings and realistic

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that

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is a solution. In

further

, helping could be done in various methods;

for instance

, in education.