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Some students tend to travel after finishing school and spend time working somewhere instead of going to the university directly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Education holds
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 value nowadays in society.
Likewise
 travelling too imparts
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 understanding of the world. Adolescents prefer travelling once they complete their high school to gain work experience before re-joining university. In the following
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 I will be discussing both the
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 merits and de-merits
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this
. In my opinion, students
prefering
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preferring
 to travel prior to their admission should be encouraged and permit them to go after what they truly desire to pursue prior to their university. In
this
 way, they gain
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 upper hand in comparison to their fellow classmates in terms of having the right work experience through which they would have the practical knowledge in their
choosen
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chosen
 fields.
Also
,
this
 provides them to
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acclimatize
acclimatise
 themselves
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 their peers in gaining sufficient life experiences.
On the other hand
, they might
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loose
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 their precious college life which most of us would not want to miss out on experiencing. Which
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, will show up on the academic
tennure
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tenure
. It happens
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 few of them will discontinue their studies once they start to
experince
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experience
flow
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 of income,
get
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 too comfortable with the earning. It will be too late to even think of pursuing after
few
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 years of taking a break from re-joining the university. Gone are the days which are impossible to retrieve back. In
clonclusion
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conclusion
 to the above paragraphs, according to
me
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 students should be
let
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 free to decide for themselves
on
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how they really want to progress
achieving
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in achieving
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 their dreams. They would learn from the path they choose and contribute to
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society in their own ways.
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