The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.

The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
Given are two maps illustrating the development of a coastal town named Pentland from 1950 to 2007.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Pentland urbanized significantly during
this
57-year period, with the disappearance of grassland alongside the main
road
and the construction of many amenities for residents. Commencing with the layout in 1950, in the middle of the map was the main
road
, leading from the north to the south, with two sideways located on the northern
side
of the
road
, near the sea, one
side
connected to the industrial
area
and the other linked to a car
park
. There was nothing else alongside the main
road
except the grassland. By 2007, it had
considerablely
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considerably
considerable
altered, a notable change had been the introduction of residential areas on the southeast
side
of the main
road
, with a cinema on the opposite and several shops located on the out layer of the houses and the cinema. The old car
park
area
had been transformed into apartments. A new
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car
park
was established in front of the shops on the same
side
as the cinema, to the north of which was a newly-built swimming pool. With the establishment of a
park
on the northwest
side
, came the demolition of the industrial
area
, which
siginificantly
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significantly
improved the air quality of
this
area
.
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