Some people think intelligent children should learn with others together, since it will benefit for everyone while other people think intelligent children should learn separately and also should get special treatment. Discuss both sides points and give your own opinion.

Children
who are good at studies, and perform well without any special external help, can be considered
as
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naturally intelligent.
Such
children
have certain characteristics
such
as quick grasping power, good analytical ability, fast
problem solving
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approach and excellent logical & reasoning abilities. Apart from
this
, they
also
have
ability
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the ability
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to comprehend the subject in
such
a way that makes it easier for them to understand the concepts thoroughly and use the learning in an effective manner.
However
,
this
natural tendency of outperforming can
also
be perceived negatively by
others
. Intelligent
children
can be the best tutors for their peers if they effectively impart their techniques to other
children
. Since every student has different levels of grasping power, it is not possible for teachers to impart education equally to all
students
.
This
creates a varying level of understanding among
students
due to which
children
, who are not very intelligent, suffer.
Therefore
, if all kinds of
children
study together, regardless of their intelligence levels, it creates easier for
children
to discuss among themselves and help each other in understanding.
Also
, it creates a competitive environment where
children
strive for improving themselves continually and achieve better results in future. Ultimately,
this
leads to the better overall development of
children
. In spite of the above mentioned positive aspects, there are certain drawbacks associated with the subject topic. The natural human tendency to outperform
others
creates a bitter competitive environment where intelligent
children
are often the victims of hatred and envy by their peers. The less intelligent
children
can
also
get disturbed by witnessing their intelligent peers outperforming every time. When
such
students
are not able to perform to their desired target level even after trying several times, they can
also
become depressed and lose interest in their studies.
Therefore
, the good intentions of making everyone study together can
also
lead to negative outcomes if situations are not favourable. In my opinion, intelligent
students
shall learn separately and shall be given separate attention & treatment so that their natural abilities can be enhanced
further
and they can develop into valuable assets for the society.
This
will
also
save them from the negative behaviour of
others
and they can focus well on their own development rather than spending time on developing
others
.
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