You have received a letter from your bank asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However the card was missing from the envelope. Explain. Why are you writing? Express concern about the missing card Ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir, I am here to inform you that yesterday I received a courier from your bank but the
card
was missing from that envelope. So I cannot acknowledge receipt for the same in reply to your mail. I am requesting you to address
this
situation on
priority
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basis because from the date,
card
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the card
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has been allotted to me is registered against my name and
also
account has been activated. In that
case
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the yearly charge will be implemented from the date of account activation at my end
either
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whether
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I use it or not. Kindly look into
this
matter and if possible cancel
this
card
and allot me a new
card
as soon as possible. Thanking you Regards Vaibhav
deshwal
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