Most companies and organizations required their employees to wear uniform to work. What are the jobs that needs the uniform to make it a good thing? What are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms.

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contracts
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the difference between the amount of
pizza
,
fish
and
chips
and
hamburgers
bought by the teens in Australia between 1975 and 2000. Over the 25 years,
fish
and
chips
being the
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consumed fast food
,
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has experienced a plunge and fall to the least bought one. At the same time, the consumption of
hamburgers
and
pizza
both increased and respectively rise to the
first
and
second
. In 1975, teens eat 100
times
fish
and
chips
peryear
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per year
but less than 20
times
hamburgers
or
pizza
. After that, the youngs prefer
fish
and
chips
less and less, though rebound slightly from 1980 to 1985. Until 2000 the average
times
of
fish
and
chips
peryear
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per year
has
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under 40. Meanwhile, the consumption of
pizza
and
hamburgers
keep on raising until 1995, despite the rate of
hamburger
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is
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slowing down while that of
pizza
is
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increasing.
However
, for the
next
five years, the amount of
pizza
eaten per year remains at about 85. The data of
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remains its increasement and raise over 100
times
annually at 2000.
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