The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy, which is unsustainable due to global warming. What future resource do you think will take oil's place? Why do you think this ?

Oil
has been used around the world for many years ,
however
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it is preposterous that some people think
oil
is sustainable. Because of global warming, we need to find alternative sources of
energy
such
as solar, wind, etc . In
this
essay, I will explain my reasoning in regards to a possible replacement for
oil
.
Firstly
, scientists have found many renewable
energy
sources that are sustainable - something that can not run out or is endless.
For example
, using the sun, we can harness its
energy
using the solar panel and convert it into electricity. Another example is wind, it is a plentiful source of clean
energy
. To harness electricity from wind
energy
, turbines are used to drive generators which
then
feed electricity towards the powerhouse.
This
, and other clean
energy
are clearly a possible alternative to the current use of
oil
for
energy
.
Secondly
, the process of acquiring
oil
for
energy
is quite unethical.
For instance
, the US is notorious for "visiting" under-developed countries and using underhanded tactics in order to acquire
oil
resources.
This
means that by using
oil
, we indirectly support
such
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act for the sake of
energy
.
This
reason alone is enough for us to consider another alternative
energy
, to prevent another "visit" from oppressive countries. In conclusion, after looking at other alternatives and how
oil
is acquired, it is clear why clean
energy
must replace
oil
. It is hoped that
this
transfer happens soon, not just for sustainability and the world's health, but
also
for the world's peace.
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