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Overpopulation in India is the main cause of poverty. Do you agree or disagree.?

#overpopulation #india #poverty
The diagram depicts how the
water
 cycle move above and below the
surface
 of the Earth. Overall, the cycle of
water
 movement contains three major
process
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 which includes evaporation, condensation and precipitation. In the evaporation process, all
water
coming
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 from different parts beneath
of
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apply
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the
Earth
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Earth's
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surfaces
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surface
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 including
ocean
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the ocean
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 which contributes approximately 80% of the total
water
vapor
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vapour
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 in
air
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the air
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 goes above the
surface
 of Earth.
As a result
, condensation of
water
vapor
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vapour
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 occurred. Whereas, the condensed
water
 formed into a cloud.
Thereafter
, precipitation takes place out of the cloud formation and pours either as a form of rain or snow. Both snow and
water
 from the lake
was
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 absorbed into
surface
 runoff and goes
to
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into
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 groundwater.
Water
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The water
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 reaches to
impervious
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the impervious
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 layer below the Earth’s
surface
.
Moreover
, it goes down and
it
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intrudes into
salt
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saltwater
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water
 until it reaches the body of
ocean
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the ocean
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 where it evaporates again and continuously
repeat
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repeats
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 the process.
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