In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It si therefore necessary for the government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The fast-

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chain is the major cause of health issues that the vast majority of people have been suffering

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excess

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consumption. I agree that

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must implement a policy of paying high taxes on

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type of

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. I will give my examples and relevant evidence in the ensuing paragraphs. On the one hand, the health sector of the ministry must teach the public

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fundamental health knowledge

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as

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consumption awareness to everyone so that they would be more responsible and well-versed on the proper way and rightful time basis of consuming junk foods. Like in the Middle East where everything is tax-free including

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, almost 100 per cent of the population

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their meal from a wide range of foodstuff restaurants.

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, different forms of illness develop and the

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is suffering from the influx number of patients in hospitals.

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once a policy is implemented, it would lessen the number of diseases acquired from overeating since people would not spend money on

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meal

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they need to budget their expenditures for other commodities like water and electric bills.

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, Asian countries that are imposing high taxes on foods maintain the optimum fitness status of their population since their money is wisely budgeted.

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in Japan, both city and countryside dwellers are living frugally as well they are producing their own organic foods to put on their table because fast-

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meals are expensive.

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, they are not prone to many diseases and capable of maintaining a healthy body throughout their lives.

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, the

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of Japan is mindful and helpful to its

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. In summary, the

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is held liable for the well-being of its community by imposing high taxes on

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fast-

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chains.

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is the best way to prevent illnesses and maintain a healthy body throughout their life existence which would benefit both

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and its community.