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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

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Nowadays, a lot of people go to other countries to live, study and work ,
this
 has many benefits but
also
 limitations
Firstly
, when going abroad we have many
oppprtunities
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opportunities
 to get acquainted , expand relationships , explore and learn experiences,
cultivate
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 knowledge and life skills.
Secondly
, working abroad
also
 gives you the opportunity to meet more international friends with colleagues or native people in your country.
On the other hand
 , there are
also
 many difficulties when studying and working abroad , the biggest difficulty is the language barrier , communication is difficult ,
finding
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and finding
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 a job here is not easy , and we must ensure.
Financial
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A financial
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 guarantee is required to be allowed to settle down,
the
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 export documents to foreign countries are
also
 very complicated for those who have no experience. But if you have the opportunity to go abroad to live and work, it is a very good thing, you should learn carefully
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 difficulties you will encounter before going. Don't forget to have quite a lot of money with you.
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