Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many times applicants are asked to provide personal
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including their interests, hobbies and
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. Some recruiters feel that
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information
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is useful.
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, personal
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gives a lot of insight into a job applicant’s personality and
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it is crucial,
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there is a small risk of it being misused by the employer. On the one hand, it is beneficial for organizations to receive
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, including their hobbies, relationship
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, and so on. The main advantage is that multinational corporations can assess whether a candidate is suitable for the job by asking for his or her personal details.
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, a position that requires frequent travel to different areas of the world will not suit married people because of their marital obligations. Or if,
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, a person is the father of several children
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will show that he is responsible and needs
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workplace. And
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means that he will approach his work responsibility.
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, in certain
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it is an important factor in hiring.
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, some people insist that employers should not ask for personal
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like marital
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and parental
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can cause prejudice. Employers can take the view that a married man is more sensible than his counterparts, or
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married woman would be less dedicated to her job.
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, many applicants can face discrimination while looking for jobs.
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, in the case of hobbies and interests, subjective bias can take place.
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to say, if a candidate’s interest matches the interviewer’s interest,
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there is a good possibility that the applicant will be recruited based on the subjective judgment of the interviewer. Having considered a number of arguments, I firmly believe that personal
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is useful for the employer
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because in most cases it is a very important indicator of a person's personality and
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comfort
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work.
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, it is understandable why employers are asking for
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, there is a small risk that the employer may use
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information
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against the employee.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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