You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Mrs Agu, My name is Dumebi and I am writing to indicate my interest in looking after your six-year-old child. I would like to work for you because I have been in search of a caregiving job for some time and I believe
this
is a wonderful opportunity.
Also
, I enjoy taking care of little children and teaching them a lot about interesting things. I believe that taking care of your child is an opportunity to practice my leadership role and I am certain he or she will learn a great deal from me. I
also
have younger siblings I take care of ,
therefore
,I am familiar with babysitting. I plan to read novels and cook new meals during my free time.
However
, I am certain your child will find cooking interesting as well. For more information about me, please call me on
this
number 09049563721, thank you for your time. Yours Faithfully, Dumebi ugwu.
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