Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Dear Mrs Barrett,

Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Jay, and I live in Athens close to Athens technical college. I am writing to let you know that I am ready to help you
next
summer. I saw your announcement on Facebook recently, and I think I will be able to give you a hand. Let me describe the things that I can perform. Regarding the outdoor activities, I can cut the lawn, and feed your animals if you have any, and I can
also
fix gates since I have my complete set of tools. The indoor activities, though I can clean, paint, and lift heavy stuff,
however
, I am not helpful when it comes to laundry as I never learned how to use the washing machine. I have been helping others for three years so far, and I really enjoy supporting them not only in the locality but
also
across our nation. I have recently joined the food bank services across Egypt to provide food for those who cannot afford to buy it. I will be available three days a week from 9:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. I can start on the
first
of May, so please let me know if
that is
convenient for you. Waiting for your reply, Best regards, Jay Carter
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