Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, My name is Jay, and I live in Athens close to Athens technical college. I am writing to let you know that I am ready to help you

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summer. I saw your announcement on Facebook recently, and I think I will be able to give you a hand. Let me describe the things that I can perform. Regarding the outdoor activities, I can cut the lawn, and feed your animals if you have any, and I can

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fix gates since I have my complete set of tools. The indoor activities, though I can clean, paint, and lift heavy stuff,

however

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, I am not helpful when it comes to laundry as I never learned how to use the washing machine. I have been helping others for three years so far, and I really enjoy supporting them not only in the locality but

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across our nation. I have recently joined the food bank services across Egypt to provide food for those who cannot afford to buy it. I will be available three days a week from 9:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m. I can start on the

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of May, so please let me know if

that is

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convenient for you. Waiting for your reply, Best regards, Jay Carter

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

212 words

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