It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, lots of people are against abusing children no matter what the reason is, while others think that punishing is necessary when it comes to teaching right and bad actions to them. From my perspective, I agree that kids should learn the difference between right and wrong when they are underage for some specific reasons.

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, I do not agree that punishment is significant for their learning skill.

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what is right and wrong action will prevent them from

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dangers as well as any negative outcomes especially when it comes to children as they are not mature and easy to fall into someone's deceptive language and parents have the responsibility to handle and protect their child by explaining and teaching them what action will bring a good outcome and what will bring a bad result.

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Include an introduction and conclusion

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