should scientists spend time rechecking previous conclusions or researching new theories

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Scientists' duty is to study the basics and rules of how
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scientist created theories or
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as a based-line to help guide us for more understanding of
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world. Many so-called
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and theories help us in many technological breakthroughs.
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not all of the previous
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and theories were fully reliable, some may have
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certain principles.
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why in my opinion scientist should still reanalyze previous
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to refine the knowledge that we have.
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we spend
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and resources on new research
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see it was with a better understanding of the previous conclusion, will help us in future research and provide us with
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we have viewed the Persian empire as the antagonist or the enemy,
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in reality
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the
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empire at the
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was considered one of the most civilized and liberty at the
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in ethnicity of his subjects
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the decree that released Jewish people from captivity. He
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makes the trade in the Persian empire flourish, the reason that the Persians were viewed as antagonists
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because most of the records of the history that previous scholars
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were recorded by the Greeks, who were at war with the Persians at the
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makes more recent scholars tend to analyze historical events based on various sources of information . In
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reasonable for scientists to reanalyze the previous
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aid us in improved improving and perfecting the knowledge that we have

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