You are applying for a Job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Dear Aisha, The reason for writing

this

letter is that I have required a recommendation letter from your side for the job purpose, as I have recently found out one opportunity in the newspaper that was on

last

week and it is related to my field of interest. I am Aisha, I am a recent graduate from the engineering department.

Firstly

this

work is very similar and much more indulge with my core and my majors like it involve mostly calculations, design and structure and

also

some kind of maps.

Furthermore

, the workplace location is ideal for me to reach out on a regular basis as I can commute there very easily.

Additionally

this

career-boosting opportunity will add to my overall technical as well as personal skills.

Moreover

, it can take me up to the level of highly demanding and highly paid jobs.

lastly

, I will be able to excel in my performance so that I can earn more incentives. In the

last

, I would like you to please add all the classes related to courses that I have learned from you as well as different software and training attended during my entire university tenure. I look forward to hearing from your side. Kind regards Aisha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

206 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are applying for a Job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: • Give details of the job • Explain why it is important to you • Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some believe that it is essential for teenagers to engage in voluntary activities during their leisure time to contribute to the well-being of the local community? Proponents argue that such a requirement would be advantageous for both the individual teenager and society in general.

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Some people say that artists such as painters, writers and musicians affect our life more than scientists. TO what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.