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The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?

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there is no denying the fact that the
world
 has increasingly become a global
culture
 owing to the availability of the same products throughout the globe in
this
 essay I am going to examine both points of view and
then
 explain why I believe that it is a positive trend in the upcoming paragraphs.
to begin
 with, there are copious reasons for
same
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 cultures the first and foremost is the accessibility of the products owing to the
trades
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trade
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 between countries enabling people of both nations to buy the items
what
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 they are demanding
furthermore
, the people of different
nation
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nations
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 travel to different parts of the
world
 and they adopt the local
culture
 and traditions in order to stay there and bring back to the homeland to cite an example, numerous of shopping malls in Pakistan having the access of imported items
such
 as WBM is an American brand their commodities are handily available in the shelves of these malls for the ethnic and foreigners folks.
on the other hand
, I would like to say that it is a positive trend owing to copious reasons it reduces
the
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cultural differences and presents it as a singular
culture
also
 combat the animosity between different nations and bring close to each other and the
world
 present a global village wherever we stay it just looks likes own land to illustration, plenty of visitors travel to Pakistan each year and they prefer to wear tradition cloths
such
 as shalwar kameez and owing to
this
 activity ethnic people praised and it is a good gesture to bring close to each other so,
therefore
 it is a positive trend
finally
, to recapitulate,
according to
 the aforementioned reasons and positive aspects I would like to restate my position that it is positive for the whole
world
 to look or adopt the same
culture
 in order to become
world
 peaceful and reduce the level of hate among them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Homogenous
  • Cultural convergence
  • Multinational corporations
  • Cultural diversity
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Cultural richness
  • Cultural identities
  • Preserving
  • Erosion
  • Dominance
  • Technological advancements
  • Consumer culture
  • International understanding
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