In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development?
These days, Shopping is a common habit between young people and old people
also
. Moreover
it is part of life and conventional routine. Nowadays, advanced Add a comma
,Moreover
countries
' populations are buying products that are not based on the requirement, Likewise
, entertainment
. As far as my opinion is concerned, it is a negative thought. Change preposition
as entertainment
Consequently
, it will create numerous issues. This
essay would further
expand my thoughts on the same in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly
, consumerism is a normal tradition of human beings. But, if it is necessary at that point there is no negative impact. Although
, western
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in western
countries
, procurement is not as per the demands it is part of lifestyle
. Add an article
the lifestyle
a lifestyle
Such
as,
metropolitan shopping attitude. Remove the comma
apply
Common
individual who works the whole month after obtaining goods extravagantly will lead to a financial crisis. Sometimes, lack of money leads to crimes and derivation of mental fitness.
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A common
The common
Secondly
, developed countries
' marketing strategies are different. Manufacturers are trying to attract customers in
various channels. Change preposition
through
For example
, through social media. Accordingly
, consumers will attract the
products. Simultaneously, demands will Increase. After all, the price will climb gradually. On Change preposition
to the
this
occasion, needless purchases will develop the price fluctuation in the market. Society must be aware about
the pros and cons of the unneeded buying of nature. Change the preposition
of
As a result
, of price
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poor population will suffer badly so everyone ought to understand Add a comma
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side
effects
In conclusion, in the Correct article usage
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first
world countries
shopping now is the way for entertainment not only for buying gadgets. I believe that the negative effect and community should buy just what they need.Submitted by ramutty2006 on
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