Nowadays, most scientific research is funded and conducted by private companies, rather than the government. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

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developments

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of countries.

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research

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conducted and supported by private firms rather than

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. Some people believe that

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situation has more benefits than drawbacks while some disagree. From my personal view, I agree that the advantages are far more than the disadvantages. Private companies usually have more capital on some specific scientific

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in many industries

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as medical, technology, environmental, mechanical and chemical.

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, Apple which is a huge tech firm

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electrical devices invented many new high technology devices and many useful

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applications

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.

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, Pfizer developed

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mRNA

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vaccine for covid 19 in a limited time for the pandemic.

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these private

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companies

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considerably earn a huge amount of capital from selling their products to the world, people

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significantly benefit

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better quality and more convenient lives.

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,

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have no control

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many aspects

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private firms and their products, especially pricing.

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can make high tech and newly invented products too expensive and not affordable for many

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. When there are more demands, the prices

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increase.

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,

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will need to depend on those private companies for their advancement in every

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.

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, vaccines, medicine, computers and electronic devices, satellites, applications and renewable energy sources.

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will have to spend more money than necessary on private companies. In conclusion,

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scientific

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from private institutes outweigh its drawbacks since it has improved people’s quality of

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and countries in many aspects. It

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help

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saves

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many lives.