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Some people think that the family is the most powerful influence on a child’s development.  Others, however, believe that other influences (such as television, friends, music, etc.) have a bigger effect on a child today.

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The flow charts describe
the
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all stages for generating
cement
 and concrete. Overall, the whole process starts
at
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 pulverizing, mixing and heating materials which generate
cement
.
Next
,
cement
 puts into
concrete
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the concrete
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mixer
 with other materials to manufacture concrete.
Firstly
, limestone, clay and crusher are dropped into the crusher respectively and squash into the power.
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, it enters the
mixer
 and workers rotate
heater
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 to heat the
mixer
 with fire. Followed by reproducing the product in the grinder, the produced
cement
are
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 bagged . Afterwards, according to
planned
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 proportion of material, workers pour solid materials including 15%
cement
 of all, 25% sand and 50% gravel into the concrete
mixer
. In the
next
 stage, 10%
water
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 is joined
in
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 the machine. After mixing constantly, the production of concrete is finished.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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