Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes.

Nowadays, there is no doubt, that money is
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a vital requirement in life for
people
and the nation. While some certain individuals think that making a proper contribution to
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society have achieved from a major sauce of tax payment by each citizen. Others claim that they can fulfil more energy incredible
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for success. In my opinion, I believe, as the latter view helps more productively in
this
phenomenon. On the
first
hand, those who argue that paying taxes certain offers a large proportion to the community as it is a crucial financial resource to authorities for developing the country.
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, some of the districts had fewer
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collected by the authority’s administration, simultaneously, the minister of the area has struggled to give budgets to manage education, payment for teacher’s
salary
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and controle pandemic health issues in that community.
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in the literacy rate had fallen and lacked expensive medicines in the local hospitals end of the year 2020 due to unable import
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some medications. Another
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expectation that taxes is that strongly taking part
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making new
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such
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and
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development
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for the
people
, because without better roads means civilians and noncitizens are facing more problems for transportation to reach destination fastly,
as a
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they stuck on the
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way most of the time in the day and
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, leads to many
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giving problems for them, as
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accidents some times and attending late for their work as well as they get
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situations.
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vast responsibilities from another a few
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to the nation.
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people
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fundamental policy and pedestrians obey their duties as well, in resulting,
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accidental rate will have fallen drastically and the mortality rate will be rise.
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harmfully for their families
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giving difficulties in different
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.
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villages and cities as they should use environmentally friendly products for daily use, green plantations and
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keeping clean and tidy of public places.
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for adults and children
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diseases. In conclusion,
nevertheless
, while paying taxes each adult is contributing
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various
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such
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are
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account.
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