Some companies and organizations require their staff to wear uniforms at workplace. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniforms?

It is true that wearing a
uniform
at the workplace has become a regulation
at
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some companies and organizations.
Although
there are some advantages of
this
trend , the drawbacks should be taken into consideration. The benefits of wearing a
uniform
are plentiful. The most significant one is that
workers
can socialize
than
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normal. Wearing
uniforms
means they wear the same
clothes
, which does not make any distinction between the rich and the poor .
Therefore
,
people
feel comfortable when
contact
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in contact

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with
others
at
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the workplaces

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workplaces
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workplace

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For example
, according to many surveys , the number of conflicts between poor
workers
and the rich ones decreased dramatically after wearing
uniform
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uniforms

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at the offices or factories because they do not know who are living in poverty or who are wealthy . Another advantage is that
people
can recognize the
workers
easily . It is true when
workers
wear
uniforms
,
others
can recognize them easily because of the unique signature of their companies on their
clothes
.
For instance
, the
uniform
of organization A is
red
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a red
the red

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skirt and white shirt for women while that of organisation B is
blue
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a blue
the blue

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shirt and black
skirts
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skirt

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.
People
can distinguish them through the differences
of
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uniforms
'
look
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looks

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.
However
,
this
trend still has some considerable drawbacks . The
first
one is that
workers
may feel annoyed while wearing the same
clothes
as
others
. Some
workers
want to have a reputation for their wearing style so they tend to wear fashionable
clothes
.
Therefore
, if they have to wear
uniform
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a uniform
the uniform

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, they feel a little bit annoyed. Another disadvantage is that it is hard for
people
to make friends in some situations. There is a fact that
people
can know about other ‘s
personality
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personalities

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via their styles so when
workers
wear
uniforms
,
others
can understand them obviously .
Therefore
, it is hard for them to make a good
relationship
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relationships

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with
others
. In conclusion,
although
the benefits of
uniforms
are plentiful , there are some considerable drawbacks.
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