School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.

In the area of modernization, we have a problem connected to the usage of
computers
at
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the educational sphere. It can be seen that
as a result
of
this
usage children
are
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tend to decrease their abilities to read and write and there is thinking suggested to solve
this
problem. Teachers should not use
computers
during the lessons and return to original studying
skills
. I absolutely agree with it because technologies can have a harmful effect on people
such
as losing
skills
and in the future children will be over-dependent on devices. The
first
reason why I am of
this
thinking is the significant impact of new technologies on the population with negative consequences. Nowadays people are trying to create new technologies to make their life easier but
as a result
, we are able to stop having natural
skills
such
as reading and writing.
For instance
, when kids have a computer which gives a lot of opportunities, handwriting and reading will be unneeded and a person will forget about them. The
second
one is
an
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effect on the future
by
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losing these
skills
. Not everyone is able to understand it, but it is really important to read and write because it helps you in daily life.
Besides
, these
skills
must be used from
a
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childhood.
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, if children are not able to read and write they will not be able to live comfortably because of a lack of knowledge and it
closely
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connected with given abilities. To conclude, there is a problem with the overuse of the
computers
and there is a solution according to which tutors should go back to the previous way of giving information at schools. I have the opinion because
computers
at schools have disadvantages
such
as losing important
skills
and negative results in future.
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