School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills.
In the area of modernization, we have a problem connected to the usage of
computers
at
the educational sphere. It can be seen that Change preposition
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as a result
of this
usage children are
tend to decrease their abilities to read and write and there is thinking suggested to solve Unnecessary verb
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this
problem. Teachers should not use computers
during the lessons and return to original studying skills
. I absolutely agree with it because technologies can have a harmful effect on people such
as losing skills
and in the future children will be over-dependent on devices.
The first
reason why I am of this
thinking is the significant impact of new technologies on the population with negative consequences. Nowadays people are trying to create new technologies to make their life easier but as a result
, we are able to stop having natural skills
such
as reading and writing. For instance
, when kids have a computer which gives a lot of opportunities, handwriting and reading will be unneeded and a person will forget about them.
The second
one is an
effect on the future Correct article usage
the
by
losing these Change preposition
of
skills
. Not everyone is able to understand it, but it is really important to read and write because it helps you in daily life. Besides
, these skills
must be used from a
childhood. Remove the article
apply
For example
, if children are not able to read and write they will not be able to live comfortably because of a lack of knowledge and it closely
connected with given abilities.
To conclude, there is a problem with the overuse of the Add a missing verb
is closely
computers
and there is a solution according to which tutors should go back to the previous way of giving information at schools. I have the opinion because computers
at schools have disadvantages such
as losing important skills
and negative results in future.Submitted by aleksandra.ponomarenkoo on
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