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The best way to understand others culture is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent you agree or disagree?

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The diagram provides information about the dynamics of various thefts of other people's property in the UK in the period from 2003 to 2012 Overall,since 2007 stealing cars have been the biggest problem.And robberies have been the least of all,no more than a thousand incidents. Burglaries were the highest figure in 2005,with approximately 3,800.After which the problems began to decrease sharply,the decline occurred until 2008,about 1,800.In 2012,the number of people in trouble had increased by 400.Auto crime did not reach less than 2,000 until 2006.The risks of falling into despair have only become greater.In 2010, the danger of vehicle burglary became similar to theft in 2016. There were fewer robberies in all the years compared to other types of savagery.In 2003 the statistics numbered 500 human beings.After 2 years, the digit
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