You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

Dear Sir, With due respect, through
this
letter, I would like to thank you that you observed my qualities and
offered
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offering

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me to join your
company
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however
, as I am still studying
in
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apply

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the English speaking
course
so I cannot join your
company
for full-time work. At the onset, though it is a great opportunity
to
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for

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me to be
the
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a

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full-time worker
of
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at

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your renowned
company
, I cannot leave my
course
in between.
It is
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Is

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because of two reasons,
first
I paid more than $250 for
this
course
and the institute has no refund of fee policy.
Second
, I am not at sea in my speaking skills so I cannot deal with the English speaking clients in an effective way.
Lastly
, I am so glad to know your offer but to be a good manager in your
company
, I need two more months to complete my
course
. I can certainly deal with our
company
's customers if I will have
a good speaking skills
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good speaking skills
a good speaking skill

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.
Hence
, I request you to let me complete my
course
in the
next
two months working on
part-time
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a part-time

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supervisor job for the requested time so that I can be an
assest
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asset

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for your
company
in future. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Harry Brown
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