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You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

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Dear Sir, With due respect, through
this
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 letter, I would like to thank you that you observed my qualities and
offered
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 me to join your
company
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however
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, as I am still studying
in
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the English speaking
course
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 so I cannot join your
company
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 for full-time work. At the onset, though it is a great opportunity
to
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for
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 me to be
the
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a
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 full-time worker
of
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at
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 your renowned
company
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, I cannot leave my
course
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 in between.
It is
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 because of two reasons,
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 I paid more than $250 for
this
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course
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 and the institute has no refund of fee policy.
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, I am not at sea in my speaking skills so I cannot deal with the English speaking clients in an effective way.
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, I am so glad to know your offer but to be a good manager in your
company
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, I need two more months to complete my
course
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. I can certainly deal with our
company
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's customers if I will have
a good speaking skills
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good speaking skills
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.
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, I request you to let me complete my
course
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 in the
next
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 two months working on
part-time
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a part-time
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 supervisor job for the requested time so that I can be an
assest
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asset
 for your
company
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 in future. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Harry Brown
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