You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

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Dear Sir, With due respect, through

this

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letter, I would like to thank you that you observed my qualities and

offered

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me to join your

company

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however

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, as I am still studying

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apply

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the English speaking

course

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so I cannot join your

company

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for full-time work. At the onset, though it is a great opportunity

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for

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me to be

the

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full-time worker

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your renowned

company

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, I cannot leave my

course

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in between.

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because of two reasons,

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I paid more than $250 for

this

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course

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and the institute has no refund of fee policy.

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, I am not at sea in my speaking skills so I cannot deal with the English speaking clients in an effective way.

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, I am so glad to know your offer but to be a good manager in your

company

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, I need two more months to complete my

course

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. I can certainly deal with our

company

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's customers if I will have

a good speaking skills

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good speaking skills

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, I request you to let me complete my

course

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in the

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two months working on

part-time

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a part-time

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supervisor job for the requested time so that I can be an

assest

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asset

for your

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in future. Look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Harry Brown

Mrjit147Sat May 14 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

214 words

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