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Nowadays celerities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development.

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In the modern era, stars gain an excessive amount of
money
 rather than
politicians
.
This
 essay will outline why
such
 a trend occurs and suggests the positive effects
on
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 the trend.
To begin
 with, there are certain reasons why
celebrities
 are richer than
politicians
. While
people
 tend to think that
politicians
 are boring,
people
 believe that stars
such
 as musicians, singers, and athletes are interesting. As the majority of
public
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 is interested in VIPs,
people
 want to be like them.
As a result
, enormous attention to
celebrities
 brings about an advertising effect.
For example
, recent media in Korea reports that a positing
that is
 written by Hae gyo Song, who is
famous
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 actor, is valued
almost
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 500,000 dollars. As the example clearly illustrates,
celebrities
’ popularity plays a key factor in earning a lot of
money
, Regarding
this
, successful stars’ popularity
have
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 advantages.
Firstly
, if a person becomes a world-wide-famous star he would have a lot of fans over the world.
Therefore
, not only can he earn
money
 from
local
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 population, but he may
also
 gain
money
 from other countries. Since he
have
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 to pay taxes to the government, more
state-funds
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state funds
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 can be collected by him, thereby leading to using funds
to
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for
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 other urgent issues
such
 as public service in the country.
In addition
, if a celebrity is sympathetic or wants to have a good reputation, he may donate
money
 to charities. Since
people
 want to mimic
celebrities
’
behaviors
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behaviours
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,
such
 a kind trend would be spread among the public.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Korea University has revealed that
celebrities
’
behavior
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 has more power to change
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the public’s
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public’s
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public
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 awareness than
politician’s
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politicians’
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 words.
Hence
, famous stars’ high-financial standards influence the public positively. In conclusion, since the population is more interested in
celebrities
 than
politicians
, the reputation of
the
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celebrities
 is a key factor in earning a lot of
money
. Not only can their
money
 contribute to
support
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 the government, but it may
also
 trigger the public to donate
for
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to
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 charities.
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