Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

Rain forests have always been an ecosystem of many organisms. They have played a vital role in supporting both

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humans'

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and

animals

life

hence

. Logging or damaging rainforests will cause issues

such

as loss of ecosystems along with an increase in

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green house

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effects.

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has made humans and

animals

become at risk of extinction.

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essay will prove it.

Firstly

damaging rainforests resulted in

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of precious habitats, for many organisms.

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, many tropical birds in

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forests population have been forced out of their home , because of

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deforestation.

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as a result

, not only

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it's cause

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the population of

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birds

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to decrease,

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result has made

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became

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invasive species to other habitats they have migrated

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why deforestation might cause

animals

to become extinct.

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, we have already seen the effect of

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green house

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effects and carbon emissions.

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the rising of sea level around the world,

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increasing temperatures and drastic

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between

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across the earth. Because

of

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,plants (

usually

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trees) were

a

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main

factors

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of

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reducing

the

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carbon emission.

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, deforestation in

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rainforest

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will only deteriorate the

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green house

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situation. In conclusion, as

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stated the consequences of

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amount of rainforest.

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make

i

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believe that logging woods from

rainforest

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directly causes an extinction threat to both

animals

and humans.

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result

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a government or

a

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authority need to take more action in

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,

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kind of activity.