You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear, Sir/Madam I am writing
this
letter gently in order to lighten you, the information which you have published in your previous prescription about kish
island
in Iran is totally incorrect. Kish
island
is not the biggest
island
in Iran whereas, you have published it as the oldest.in lightening the fact Gheshm
island
is the biggest one whit more than two million kilometres wide.
Furthermore
, it is vital for an international magazine like you to search adequately around the title which wants to provide worldwide. I ] argue to you that it is essential to inform the correct information and make an apology in your
next
month's magazine to lighten people and travel agencies who have a great level of attention to you when they are searching for destinations.
Finally
, all the affirmations certainly would play an important role in retaining your reputation. so, it would be better to take an action as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Masi.Dehbashi
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