Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Is this a negative or positive development?

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sweeping

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of technology developing rapidly,intelligent products have entered quantity of people’s home and work to provide convenience for their lives.It has to be admitted that

this

phenomenon does more good than harm even

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will still have some hidden dangers.

Firstly

,robotic products can give people’s daily lives a hand to ease their burden.A case in point is a hot-sale product,

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mopping robot,which can help housewives

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with their dirty floor and

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more time for them to do whatever they want.

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a coffee machine

also

does a great job

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shortening the wasted time. It is manifest that

robots

can almost simply free people from their boring daily work.

Secondly

,these technology

robots

can impose more positive influences on dealing

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works

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.As an example,medical

robots

have been put into major surgeries

instead

of doctors performing

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their hands for several years.These

robots

can do more complex

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work

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than

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.Particularly,in the factories,

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number of productions

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been the main force

instead

of manpower.

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,

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trend

will trigger post-industrialization society unprecedentedly advancing.Neuromancer which

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by William Ford Gibson had expounded the worry about

this

trend

,more

robots

and cyborgs but

less human

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fewer humans

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.If we place

this

trend

arbitrarily developing,we will lose our living environment and living skills.

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conclusion,

robots

are

benefit

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for

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our life with their convenience and professional technique,but we

also

need

pay

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attention

on

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their development.I am quite convinced that

a

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more technology and survivable society will

born

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in several years.