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how important is respect for older people? what about being on time? and how important is the written word compared to the spoken?

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Introduction
Today I am going to talk about three topics from my
culture
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. Before I start, I will give an outline of the content.
First
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, I will discuss
respect
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 for older
people
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.
Next
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, I will examine the importance of being on
time
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 and
then
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, I will review the written word against the spoken.
Finally
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, I will give my opinion on these three themes.
Body paragraph 1
In the
first
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 place,
respect
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to
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for
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 each other is one of the most important moral acts in all societies, especially when we face
to
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apply
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an
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apply
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older
people
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.
This
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 is
also
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 true in my
culture
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. In my
culture
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, in the past,
respect
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 for older even elder brothers was an unwritten rule and they were punished when the
people
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 did the opposite. Unfortunately, nowadays, it has faded, but
still
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 there are some
people
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 who
respect
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to
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older
people
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 or prevent an individual’s misbehaviour toward them.
Body paragraph 2
Secondly
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, being on
time
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 is one of the social behaviours which out of luck, very few
people
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 in my
culture
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 are on
time
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. It does not matter that in what situation you are; be
in
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it in
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 a hospital, be in an office or waiting for a friend, you cannot see any on-
time
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 activities.
Body paragraph 3
As the
last
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 topic, the words which
people
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 gave to each other have changed over
time
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.
For instance
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, in the past, in my
culture
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people
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 had reliability with each other. So they could have the spoken words. Nowadays, it is not acceptable unfortunately because of social problems so the spoken words have changed to the written.
Conclusion
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, there are some acts which all the
people
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 should observe in the societies. I think these three issues which I argued are the most important ones.
For giving
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Forgiving
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an
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apply
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example, when you be on
time
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, you show your
respect
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 to your opposite side. In my opinion, if we want to make cultural progress, we have to implement these basic points.

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