Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraging as it is good for both employers and workers. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In today's modern world, working from
home
instead
of an office
is becoming more popular. Some studies on the advantages or disadvantages of this
situation show that working from home
has lots of benefits for workers and employers. In this
essay, I will explain why distance work
is better than office
work
.
Time
is equal to whole people, everyone has 24 hours in a day. In addition
, we have lots of work
to do in daily life in comparison with the past. Because of this
, we must use our time
effectively. Wearing, doing making-up, and travelling to the office
are activities that take too much time
. But if we would work
from home
, we save our time
that spend on activities like that.
The second
argument is about "stress". Stress is responsible for early deaths, certain chronic diseases and psychological problems. Working in an office
is quite a stressful activity and even too little person is aware of that. A research
indicates that working let alone, even to being in an Remove the article
Research
office
is a stressful situation. I think, therefore
, we should think about working from home
in some situations.
In conclusion, owing
its benefits and comfort I prefer to Add the preposition
toowing
work
from home
instead
of going to an office
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite