Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?

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Characteristic

features

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differentiate for each person.

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, nowadays,

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discussions

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have been continuing about which ways affect people's traits,

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as environmental experiences or inborn

features

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. I am in

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that

environment

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the environment

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has more impact than inborn ones.

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, human-being is a social life form.

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, individuals are to improve

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their self

theirself

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themselves

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up to

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physical

physicial

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the physicial

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world that they live in.

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, If persons living in

asian

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and

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zones are compared to each other, it will emerge rather

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distinctive

differents. While

european

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European

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people are open-minded more,

asian

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Asian

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ones become more conservative. Another example to be given is that far-east humans are much more competitive compared to

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. On the other side, in spite of all explanations, it is a fact that some critical

features

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remain

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apply

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stabile

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stable

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without any changes, despite

social

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the social

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environment. Emotions can be demonstrated as

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. According to the studies conducted by Toronto University, traits

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to mother and father are transferred to children up to a degree before borning. Especially, art skills

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as music or painting are conveyed to babies

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parents. Backing to the history, Mozart, Beethoven and many more carried traits of

own

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their own

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parents. To recapitulate,

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opine that environmental forces play

role

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a role

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

nature vs. nurture debate
genetic inheritance
personality traits
behavior patterns
heritability
twins studies
malleable characteristics
upbringing
environmental influences
critical periods
language acquisition
worldview
innate traits
personal experiences
psychological development
epigenetics
adaptive behaviors
cultural imprinting
temperament
social conditioning

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. which do you consider to be the major influence?

Fully explain your ideas

🔶Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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The image explains how Pu-erh ripe tea and raw tea are made

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