In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Several solutions are suggested by experts to solve the problem of population explosion in megacities,

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among them, urban to rural migration is said to be the best one.

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both positive and negative sides to it, I am convinced that the benefits are far more than

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drawbacks. One main

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for

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to provide enough facilities for their settlers.

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is because the speed of population growth exceeded the ability of these

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to improve their infrastructure. A good example of it is public transportation which could not respond

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demands and has resulted in

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to use their private cars.

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has led to an increase in traffic jams and dissatisfaction

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outside

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of big

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, these towns would be a better place for those who remain.

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improvement

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of rural areas. It is needless to say that humans take developments to the places they go.

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, if the young generation

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to a rural region with a high rate of old population, the

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of those areas will increase and local businesses will improve.

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, not only do the ones who migrate have better job opportunities but

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of new businesses from

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to a rural

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, local

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will have more job offers. Despite the above so-called positive sides, there is an argument against

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solution. Those who move to new places are forced to leave all the facilities that are available in big

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like equipped hospitals, reputed high schools, shopping markets and gyms.

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, they might be forced to travel to big

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to seek advanced medical

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which requires

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sum of money.

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solution might cause some difficulties for those who migrate to access public services they were used to. To sum up, the advantages of urban to rural migration are greater than

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disadvantages. It contributes to

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of both

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and rural regions;

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, the ones who move might encounter some difficulties.