''It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?’'

It is argued that at an early

age

punishment

is essential for

children

to know the difference between right and wrong. In my opinion, I agree with the statement mentioned above because

punishment

can assist

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children

to value their

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action

, and

similarly

, parents and teachers ought to give knowledge about good behaviour with some simple

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action

.

Punishment

is one of the most significant

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action

that can be done for

children

to give them an awareness of their doings ,especially at a young

age

.

This

is to say that a potential warning and provide enlightenment to kids that he did wrong and it can be absorbed immediately because of their fresh

mind

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minds

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.

For instance

, I

remembered

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during

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an early

age

, as an Asian kid, my father used to call my attention to the things that I

have

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done. His normal

action

if I did wrong was to hit me. I knew that back

then

that

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he just

want

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me to learn which one

is

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best for me and until now I still remember

those

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to

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not

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that

action

again.

Furthermore

, parents and teachers might as well give

children

a

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simple discipline

so that

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to have them realise the negative outcome of their

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actions

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action

.

For example

, if the

children

are not doing their homework and they are only watching television, for

this

scenario usually the parents will turn off the television and

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them that they cannot watch until they

finished

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finish

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their homework.

In addition

for teachers, the simple activity of

punishment

can be done

such

as additional projects , surprise examinations , and oral recitations . In conclusion,

This

essay supports that

punishment

should be provided at an early

age

because the

children

can learn immediately the value of their

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actions

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action

and similar to guardians

that

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they can provide simple

punishment

.