Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes to recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some of us believe that if governments don`t legislate on recycling,
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of all, in recent years re-produce is increased. Re-produce (that`s what I called) is producing things using materials.
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-hand consumption is preferred by most of them. A lot of campaigns come into existence
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a lot of countries couldn`t reach 100% ,
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Swiss, Germany, and Norway has a really highest level of
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I couldn`t say that individuals doing
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anything not important
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sum up , I agree,
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governments have to do something but
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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