Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The general public believes that like-minded people are better connected with each other,

nevertheless

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, there are those who oppose

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point of view. In

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essay, I will discuss both opinions and give my own

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on the matter.

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, I will explore the way dissident friends affect us and

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, I will write about how it is important for our mental health when there is someone who absolutely understands us.

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and without a doubt, every person needs someone who will correct his mistakes accurately and give advice.

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, an individual whose opinion has no difference in comparison with yours can not be a good adviser or even

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you worse.

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, each of us must understand both good and bad influences on our lives and only those who have another position are able to lead us to better decisions. It is very

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exemplified by a company's staff when there is a person who always suggests different ideas or looks for disadvantages of their own product.

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, our lifestyle directly depends on our surroundings and human beings who are called our friends influence our

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differently.

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, there are situations when a person needs not only advice but support from his close friend.

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, our wellness is in their hands.

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, my sister not always

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me correctly

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her own views which are not similar comparatively to mine and

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makes me

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depressed and lonely.

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, it is priceless when human beings agree on many aspects of their lives. In conclusion, from the arguments I have given

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I can say that I totally agree with the statement that close individuals who have the same points of view better communicate and we must support each other.

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Include a more thorough discussion of the opposing view and provide a balanced argument.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

304 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

bond
support
unconditional love
shared values
mutual understanding
trust
emotional well-being
interdependence
societal norms
companionship
loyalty
advice
experiences
mentorship
trustworthy
reliable
reliable
cherish
strengthen
deepen
attach importance to
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