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Overpopulation in India is the main cause of poverty. Do you agree or disagree.?

#overpopulation #india #poverty
The chart depicts the rate of Smoking in
Someland
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Homeland
 for men and women. The report has been accomplished from the years 1960 to 2000. Overall, women
has
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 the lowest number of
smokers
 and men got the highest total rate of
smokers
 in the beginning. Meanwhile, in the
end
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 female
smokers
 increased while male
smokers
 declined but had the top spot. In the
year
 1960, female
smokers
 started at almost 100 per 1000 people who were smoking and it gradually elevated and reached approximately triple its value in the
year
 1975 and stayed the same in 1980.
Subsequently
, it slowly decreased
year
 by
year
 until it reached about 200 per 1000 people in the
year
 2000.
This
 rate increased by almost 100 compared to the beginning of 1960 up to the
year
 2000. With regard to the Male in smoking activities, they
were
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clearly dominated the record at the beginning of the
year
 1960 which was about 600
smoker
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.
Although
, it drastically plummetted throughout the succeeding 7 years and ended with approximately above 200 in the
year
 2000, comparing
this
 with the women who only achieved almost 200 per 1000 people only. or 2 out of 10.
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