Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

many believe we should not pay much

money

to protect endangered species. I hugely agree that

animals

are worth

to be

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paid to be saved, and they should inherit

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the future. All

animals

, especially those who faced

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extinction, are like

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diamond

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which are worthy, we must spend

money

for them, to be preserved. Humans' errors mostly have caused them to be destroyed.

Moreover

, they are valuable gifts from god

hence

, we should try to save them, without consideration

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the amount of

money

spent.

For instance

, marines' lives are going to be devastated

for

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chemical substances which are

flowed

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into the oceans.

As a result

, people should pay for compensation and attempt to save these magnificent creatures.

In addition

, all

animals

are

heritage

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for the

next

generation which

make

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me believe to be valued to apply monetary solutions. Many may think there are various creatures and we should not worry about

animals

prone

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to extinction, if endangered species died out, other

animals

would

be vanished

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gradually.

Consequently

, we should protect even endangered species to continue their lives for

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humans. Nations can learn from them and respect their ancestors as well.

Furthermore

, they will consider their environment more respectful. In conclusion, I believe,

public

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should make many efforts to preserve all

kind

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of

animals

, endangered ones

In particular

, and it does not matter how much

money

would be cost since all survival creatures are worth to

be cared

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.

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Also

, we

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responsible

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to

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the

next

generation to see them and be educated.