Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, an only offers practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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on people’s

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. Some people believe that in order to increase

graduates

’

job

opportunities; educational establishments should educate more vocational subjects than training arts subjects because of a huge amount of universities’ tuition and the reduction in

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of

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. I am not convinced that universities should offer practical degree courses. There are several reasons why some concerns say that

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artistic topics can be hugely beneficial for

graduates

.

firstly

,

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society needs

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wide range of

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like philosophy and history. Simply put, the vocational occupation can not

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all needs of

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world, and individuals should be skilled and knowledgeable in all the aspects

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as

art

.

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, the scholars in the educational institutions, are being taught by well-educated teachers who had studied

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subject

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to be skilled to transmit

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topic to the new generations,

therefore

if universities did not offer artistic courses, and focused on practical

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, current society would suffer from the shortage of the essential knowledge like history and philosophy. As a consequence, considering arts as

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constructive and positive effects on

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society

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development, and

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of it will have

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toll on

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.

Secondly

, the

art

graduates

would obtain a well-powered occupation and earn more money than practical jobs. There are constant stories about successful citizens who are involved in

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job

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and are offered to

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in

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well paid

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careers. Take developed countries as an example, more and more individuals with

art

qualifications are

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in profitable jobs, so students are tending to study and train in

this

field because of

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good

job

prospects.

As a result

, the

art

graduates

will move up the ladder quickly and gain lucrative occupations. In conclusion,

Although

, the practical qualifications might bring out the

job

opportunities,

art

degrees will apparently be fruitful for

graduates

because of fulfilling

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requirements and golden opportunities

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hiring.