In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvanta

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Industries and businesses are being encouraged to move to regional areas outside the big
cities
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by governments in most of the countries, that have some positive points like keeping air pollution and its rubbish away from the
cities
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it can help the traffics downtown. But there are some
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, people who work there may lose a long time for their commute and the
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one is the cost of transportation to the
cities
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for factories and companies. We can avoid the
problems
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which can be caused by the industries and businesses in the
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moving them out of the area because most of the factories are producing enormous rubbish
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as their poison gas which
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sulphur, methane and more carbon dioxide, and even their sewage
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can cause harmful
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for the urban. If factories go out of the
cities
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their sewage will be separated and their poison smoke will not cause any
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is reducing the traffic at the town since many people who
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in companies and industries need to get to their job every day and
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