Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Personally, I agree with the conclusion that it has an adverse effect on the community. It is true that these days, because of work and study pressure, many people do not want to live with their families.
Firstly
, if you are a worker or an official, you will need more time
for your work. So when you have your own family or live with your family, you have to take care of other members, which wastes your time
. Second
, due to problems of generation gap or convenience for work, more and more people are moving out of their homes to live alone or with their friends. If you live alone you will have more free time
to do everything you want and you will have more time
to relax or if you go with friends you will be able to talk about private things that only Only your friends understand what you are saying.Submitted by nguyenpqbao0111 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite