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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in classrooms. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#universities #colleges #qualifications #distance #internet #teachers #classrooms #development
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It is extremely true that
education
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 is a much significant element in
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 of students which helps them to become more creative.There are plenty of technical
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 by which
study
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 institutions teach their pupils rather than
study
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 in a room. Both the pros and cons will be discussed in
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scarcity
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 which causes their life and by doing
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study
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 through global digital media, sufficient
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, in most
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the offline
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 platforms, learners have to waste their
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 due to
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 of their crucial lectures.
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, in universities and
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 there is a long gap
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 periods and because of that a large amount of expensive
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, in online
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classes
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 students can easily do
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 of activities in their free
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 as well as if they wish to do any
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time
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 job or work, they can easily do
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 to their
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, commuting expenditure can be saved; if observers
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. As
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 a lot of money is spent by students to reach
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study
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 institutions so it can be saved by online studies.
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, studies through
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 are always inexpensive as compared to
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 in offline
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, by joining online
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, costly fees can be saved by learners which can be expended on other potential things that can be beneficial for them. Alternatively,
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, drawbacks are
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 with their tutors directly, appropriate ideas and problems can be discussed which is not possible
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online as sometimes network becomes an issue.
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, it is not
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 way to teach. Meanwhile, new technical
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 traditional methods of teaching which is not a convenient concern.So,
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 of teaching,
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 value of studying can be dropped. To conclude, technical
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 of
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 in
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 centres are adapted by folks as compared to offline
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.
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 and expenditure
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 commuting can be saved which are the main benefits of
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 of pupils as their ideas and issues cannot be discussed properly. But pros are more
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compared to drawbacks
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