some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are arguments, that we should adapt to
bad
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a bad
situation
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situations
for
instance
unsatisfactory Add the comma(s)
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job
or insufficient amount of money. There is Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
dispute
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a dispute
,
because others claim we should try to improve these unpleasant conditions. In my essay, I am going to discuss both these views and give my own opinion.
It can not be denied that not everything is going as we dreamed about it, including Remove the comma
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occupation
and Correct pronoun usage
our occupation
amount
of money we should live with. From one point of Correct article usage
the amount
view
, we should at least to
attempt to accept these conditions, because Fix the infinitive
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otherwise
we may become greedy. In the eastern world, is thought, that doesn´t matter Add a comma
,otherwise
with
what we have to deal with, it is all about our mindset statement. We have to learn how to tackle Change preposition
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every day
issues and how to accept themReplace the word
everyday
,
because it is what life brings to us and it is our life way we should come through. From Remove the comma
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this
point of view
, I agree we should find the
way how to become happy in whatever circumstancesCorrect article usage
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,
because it improves our human features.
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On the other hand
, focusing on the nowadays western life generally described as mainstream, everyone is trying to put himself to
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in
better
position, not just in the work, including higher income, but broadly speaking in every aspect of his existence. From Add an article
a better
this
perception of view
, it is understandable, because the majority of us would like to have more money, bigger
house, two cars, holidays in Add an article
a bigger
tropics
and whatsoever else. If it is not achievable in the current occupation, we search Correct article usage
the tropics
happiness
elsewhere, until we succeed. Linked to Change preposition
for happiness
this
way of thinking I agree at least partially.
In a nutshell, from one point of view
we should try to adapt to present circumstances. Add a comma
,view
Nevertheless
, there are others who would always try to find better conditions for themselves and exactly this
might be source
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite